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Yes that army is Global Defenders As you all know GD Have been in CPAC top 10 before and are on some of CPAC graphics now and then But lately they sadly been on downfall And been getting 3-4+ here is what they looked like just a week ago!
Its almost sad how they dropped so dramatically! But with another army called Chilliteckers
Took there drop to there advantage by invading GD servers but GD Got huge rise at the Defence Of Glacier and got a huge size of 13+ and averaged 10 here few pics of this battle!
GD Saying 'We are the bosses'
GD E+9 war faces!
E+W ice cream!
Wonder what there secret is? are they having the troops having there friends join? or they doing adds? what is the strategy? Well looks like GD are now planning invasions on Chilliteckers will they get there sizes back? maybe this time 20+ lets hope the best for GD Well Cya later SMACERS!
Will GD Get back to there historic sizes?
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Improvements:
1. WAT DID I SAY ABOUT THE INTRODUCTION. If you really like saying "HEY SMACIES", say it AFTER the "one liner". Refer to Reporting page. Always start your post with a one-line summary.
2. At least 300 words. This is 200.
3. Grammar needs improvement, but grammar can't really be taught, so never mind about that. Just try your best.
4. The conclusion needs a more detailed analysis. What do you think will happen next to GD- will they win the war? Will they continue to rise? etc.
5. Make your title related to the content. Army on the Rise- the Global Defenders would have been a better choice.